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Benno's avatar

A really tough poem to go through, kinda glad the commentary was lighter with a picture of the host of poetry on tape wilding a scythe.

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Josh Datko's avatar

It is a very effective cutting tool! But I wouldn't want to do an entire field 🥵

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Daniel V. Gaglio's avatar

Amazing imagery in this one

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Josh Datko's avatar

Yeah, this one I have been looking forward to translating.

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Laura's avatar

WE ARE NOW HALFWAY

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Josh Datko's avatar

I don’t know if I’m encouraging myself or readers with this statement :)

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Rea de Miranda's avatar

I love this.

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Josh Datko's avatar

Thanks! Yeah, it's an aspect of military life that I feel gets overlooked too often.

Appreciate you comment and reading.

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Justin Patrick Moore's avatar

So powerful. I can see why this is the one that sucked you into the whole cycle. (Or is that scythcle?)

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Josh Datko's avatar

Scythes have a way of getting your attention. 🙂

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