Ripples to the sea

[James Hart]

"Climbing, my full moon rises rung by rung to dry in the night light."

Solid. Love that line—that's kind of how I see it, too, when the moon rises over the water.

[jybyky]

Beautiful atmosphere, full moon.

[Josh Datko]

Thank you 🙏

[Rea de Miranda]

Love this one, Josh! Playful.

[Josh Datko]

Thanks Rea! Not quite dancing on a mountain in thunderstorm but I tried to summon some wild energy here.

[Rea de Miranda]

Mine is a little dangerous! 😊

[Benno]

Very lyrical and vivid!

[Josh Datko]

You can only see things as they are without clothes! :)

[Simon]

I'm at the point where I can only read your poems in your voice. Your style has really solidified itself.

[Josh Datko]

Haha yeah, I'll happily take that :) Thanks Simon!

[Wil Price]

This is a fun one! Very delightful imagery.

[Josh Datko]

Thanks Wil! It's been a very inspiring trip so far.

[JP]

I really love that last line

[Josh Datko]

Thanks JP, W for the win :)

[Blace Alcock]

Wonderful imagery. Some of the best poetry always comes from lived experiences

[Josh Datko]

Yeah, it's a nice feedback circle I've noticed. You start to write more poetry and then you start living a poetic life. 😀

[Stephanie M. Vargo]

Wonderful!

[Josh Datko]

Thanks! Appreciate the read 📖