It's so interesting to see what parts grab people's attention, thank you for noticing.
I really like how this came out, I hope I can try to recreate the energy I had when I wrote it for more, but already today I notice I'm feeling not as connected.
My dad was once attacked by an owl in an old deer stand he was wondering why owl shit was everywhere it had a nested up above him. Damn thing nearly knocked him out of tree.
I'm a fan of how you use spacing of sentences, it's inspiring to me!
Aw, thanks! It's like a fun additional element to experiment with.
Those FUCKING RODENTS! I must FEED!!!! hahaha I'm having a blast with this one
The rapid multiplication is more frightening than the rodent itself. I liked your use of ‘-’ and the string of ‘Z’s
It's so interesting to see what parts grab people's attention, thank you for noticing.
I really like how this came out, I hope I can try to recreate the energy I had when I wrote it for more, but already today I notice I'm feeling not as connected.
I haven’t even started my poem for today! Lord help.
My dad was once attacked by an owl in an old deer stand he was wondering why owl shit was everywhere it had a nested up above him. Damn thing nearly knocked him out of tree.
Awesome poem!
Amazing creatures. Everytime I look at them i get more impressed.