And the meter, the rhythm of this poem. It really moves well. I hear you on the part of voice effects can easily be over done, but this has a good use of the effect, the quality of the audio is really really good, and the effects really add to the poem—like it is artistically intentional as opposed to just being effects in themselves. Really nice job Josh!
I actually really enjoyed the poem--straight. Like a shot. No context other than the poem and your wild reading. HHmmm something to be said for the shorter stuff, no less rich.
Or maybe I'm just a sucker for your great poetry. :) Loved it!
Thanks :) Yeah, I think we were definitely talking about this and I was still thinking of that mechanical watch one — then I was getting a bit upset trying to find some picture on my phone and then out popped this one.
We need to do something though because leaving someone your google photos password is kinda lame.
Ah thanks Gavin, appreciate you reading and listening! I like to experiment with the two being a bit different as there things one can do in audio that can play with the ideas in the poem perhaps.
Haha, yeah I saw briefly your essay on Lynch and saw some references to digital detox like things but I haven't fully read it -- looking forward to it though!
I like this poem very creative however there are some parts I didn't feel flowed to well, like: "typewritten typo'd poems. Its pretty creative not gonna lie, but poems IMO doesn't fit with the flow of what you're going for, I'd advice "words" instead. Sorry for my nitpicking you got a good voice though
Oh I see. Yeah, hmmm, in my mind and in my reading I do pronounce it a bit more like "pome" which I'm not sure where I picked up.
Despite being trained in nuclear reactors, I also pronounce nuclear like homer simpson and this pissed off many Naval officers -- to the point they wanted to give me speech lessons haha. The military is insane. Anyway, habits are hard to break.
"bit rot" is a sick visual. Really nice, Josh!
Like stale bread perhaps :)
Nice work with the audio! I don't think they were overdone; rather they were very fitting!
The voice effects were excellent
Really love the audio work Josh! This is dope.
Ah yeah thanks! Voice effects are easy to overdo but also so fun 😁
And the meter, the rhythm of this poem. It really moves well. I hear you on the part of voice effects can easily be over done, but this has a good use of the effect, the quality of the audio is really really good, and the effects really add to the poem—like it is artistically intentional as opposed to just being effects in themselves. Really nice job Josh!
Well, thank you 😊
This was a WHOLE SCENE, Analog Josh. Very cool.
I actually really enjoyed the poem--straight. Like a shot. No context other than the poem and your wild reading. HHmmm something to be said for the shorter stuff, no less rich.
Or maybe I'm just a sucker for your great poetry. :) Loved it!
Thanks :) Yeah, I think we were definitely talking about this and I was still thinking of that mechanical watch one — then I was getting a bit upset trying to find some picture on my phone and then out popped this one.
We need to do something though because leaving someone your google photos password is kinda lame.
You are leaving behind a great legacy, Josh!
Thanks Rea! :)
The voice over really takes this poem to another level
Thanks Daniel! Yeah, I fun with this one :)
That audio is exceptionally well made and very original. Enjoyed that quite a bit
Ah thanks Gavin, appreciate you reading and listening! I like to experiment with the two being a bit different as there things one can do in audio that can play with the ideas in the poem perhaps.
In the time of the unreal, it's nice to have physical reminders of your existence. Analog forever.
Haha, yeah I saw briefly your essay on Lynch and saw some references to digital detox like things but I haven't fully read it -- looking forward to it though!
Excited to hear your thoughts Josh!
I like this poem very creative however there are some parts I didn't feel flowed to well, like: "typewritten typo'd poems. Its pretty creative not gonna lie, but poems IMO doesn't fit with the flow of what you're going for, I'd advice "words" instead. Sorry for my nitpicking you got a good voice though
The hard "o" in poem flows well after typo'd, though. It depends on how you read it.
Oh I see. Yeah, hmmm, in my mind and in my reading I do pronounce it a bit more like "pome" which I'm not sure where I picked up.
Despite being trained in nuclear reactors, I also pronounce nuclear like homer simpson and this pissed off many Naval officers -- to the point they wanted to give me speech lessons haha. The military is insane. Anyway, habits are hard to break.
It's all good. Thanks for reading and the feedback!