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Wil Price's avatar

“missiles / from massacred mandibles” You always do such a great job of pairing sound with emotion! I particularly liked those lines in te opening. The tone was kept up very well throughout!

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Phoenix F.'s avatar

You’re a master of ambient audio. Really like the panning effect. Coming back to this poem and hearing the commercialization and nonchalance of American bloodthirst in the audio makes it even more compelling and disturbing. Hopefully one day anti-war writing won’t be so relevant.

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