I'm a simple man: I see alliteration, I adore it. These descriptions of natural phenomena laced with computer terminology is a curious thing, but then again I visualized it all via a screen anyway. Perhaps it's a bit of a meta-poem that way.
Yeah, that’s what kind of drove this one — curiosity. It started out as a nature poem but I felt there was strong parallel with a technological one. I gave up on it, and then came back to it, gave up on it, and came back to it.
It’s one that I think would be better suited in an appropriate collection — which is always the challenge of posting here — but I liked it nonetheless.
But I appreciate you reading and the thoughtful comment!
I'm a simple man: I see alliteration, I adore it. These descriptions of natural phenomena laced with computer terminology is a curious thing, but then again I visualized it all via a screen anyway. Perhaps it's a bit of a meta-poem that way.
Yeah, that’s what kind of drove this one — curiosity. It started out as a nature poem but I felt there was strong parallel with a technological one. I gave up on it, and then came back to it, gave up on it, and came back to it.
It’s one that I think would be better suited in an appropriate collection — which is always the challenge of posting here — but I liked it nonetheless.
But I appreciate you reading and the thoughtful comment!
Took the words right out of my mouth, it was such an interesting dynamic
Thanks! I was trying something a bit different with this one, appreciate you giving it a read!
Beautiful, loved the liminal texture of the poem,
Glitchy grasshoppers
flee the field of fuel
where I stand frozen.
Is almost an stand alone haiku, very NICE!
Forms within forms! Thanks Benno, appreciate you reading. Hope all the movie club calls are going well, I only heard good things about them.
Reminds me of the long weekend I just had upstate
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I can taste the approach and feel the build here....
appreciate that!