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Prefacing with the news report really helped add the context and flair. I've been enjoying your style of delivery since you started implementing audio.

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The directional shift made me imagine the directions the casing might have flown!

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I like how this haiku shifts the focus from the act to the aftermath

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Thanks! Yeah once I had thought about this pun, it was too good for me not to release 😀

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A bit of dark humor is good for the soul 😀

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