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Excellent ending

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Thank you 🫂

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I like the use of layout.

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Thanks!

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Powerful ending. It truly is wasteful beyond imagination, not that old men in war rooms care.

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Yeah 😞

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Yep. 😔

More! Anti-war! Poetry!

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Yes!

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I think I got this symbolism!

Red tailed hawk I am assuming is a military plane but using the word Hawk nature gets involved?

Hope all is well, Josh. I like the anti war poetry.

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Yeah that's one way! Or hawks like "war hawks." I don't assign meaning 😃

The fact about the sound though is true -- people do replace the sound of a red tailed hawk with a bald eagle. Bald Eagle's make a kind of small chirp. The red tailed hawk has the scream most people think is from a bald eagle.

When I do the audio you'll hear it, but perhaps you already know!

Appreciate as always you stopping by Martin.

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