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Martin Garcia's avatar

I got the false promise that money provides. Life will only be better the richer we are. All you need it more. Loved it! The repeating first line made the poem more engaging.

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Josh Datko's avatar

Yeah, that I stole from Rober Bly, but you are correct it does.

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Sandforte's avatar

An intriguing remix, into a more relevant topic of late-stage capitalism. I enjoyed it 😎

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Josh Datko's avatar

Channeling some poetry hip hop here, resampling and remixing 😀

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Sandforte's avatar

An interesting remix into a more relevant angle of capitalism and foreign aid.

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