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Poetry on Tape 25.4.25

In which I start the show by playing a real tape

Thanks everyone for joining live (and watching now!). What did you miss today? We started out playing Madame Psychosis meets Marshall McLuhan from the latest issue of bitpunk.fm.

Then we read from Through the Vanishing Point: Space in Poetry and Painting by Marshall McLuhan and Harley Parker.

And quite a range of substack poetry this week starting with

Abby Schleifer
“Bluebird”
“Bluebird”I hear it before I see it— the slow rush of a monsoon. I taste it before I smell it— the salty crisp of surf's up. I feel it before I touch it— the careful stitch of antique lace. I love it before I like it— the cream of the crop, how it slowly rises to the top. I hold it before I know it— the…
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I really liked her use of other senses in this poem, which tied nicely with the McLuhan piece we read at the beginning.

Ray Diess Writes
Clicking of the Ants
I prayed for a pin to stick the blooming — the great God Pop that brought the sun to its place of low mourning, swimming like so much egg yolk against the sky. When our fire dies, I will dine on my teeth, finding bits of lilies and old graffiti stuck, still, in their crease, until the good earth is polished, as the…
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And

has some fire lines, “God Pop” and such. But yes, the ants, despite us stepping on them, I think they will be fine when the humans are gone.

We then had a nicer caller share a poem found from fifth graders. What blew me away was it was how in tune with nature these elementary kids were! Thanks for calling!

Continuing with

Stranger Strands
A seed is a promise
A seed promise of a tree A soul promise of god We go through this things that point beyond what are words seeds of what is the poet gardener of things that bloom of sound and shapes, of tongues and ears, the delights of children's whims as they press their eyelids and promises of worlds whi…
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He also had some nice collaborative pieces this week with a few people, so go catchup on those.

Then we read

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The chat got a bit lively on this one, which was fun. :)

And lastly,

and ‘s collaborative ghazal:

Arthouse Poetry
Cinema Ghazals - featuring Bence Ádók - Twilight (Szürkület)
*This is a special version of a series called Cinema Sonnets, where I invite fellow substack poets to pick a film, which we will both subsequently watch, meditate on, and use as inspiration for poetry. In this episode the Ghazal form will be used as opposed to the sonnet…
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I continued to be impressed by this collaborate form and it was nice to see Bence’s twist to the ghazal here.

Thank you

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