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Poetry on Tape 12.9.25

A spicy Friday and we aren't talking pumpkin spice.

We started things hot and only got hotter. First I read To Elsie by William Carlos Williams. History can teach us what happened, but poetry lets us feel the past. And this WCW poem is both sad in its applicability to day but perhaps comforting in a way as well.

Trevor Kuether came to the rescue this week with his poem:

Ruminations of a Form
Flagpole
Anytime All the time My flagpole is At half-staff Where tears accompany A breath removed To little fanfare A common theme Always someone Somewhere anywhere Going through Something everything The everyday Tragedy's day Anytime All the time The flagpole Remains as is And the ship lists A motion stopped Where attention neglected But missed when …
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I think it’s the poem we all needed. Unlike all the hot takes this week, Trevor took the time to get into our psyche. This is my new favorite poem of his.

Deborah Kay Kelly had also a nice poem with:

Deborah’s Substack
American Falls
Visible waves in the waterfall…
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X. P. Callahan said this was a “political” poem done right and I think I agree. A clear image, just a single phrase that really sharpens the knife. Very nice poem Deborah, I enjoyed it.

Then I read Edward.Marlo.Ruiz ‘s poem:

PineBox Readings
A POEM | Bright Side of the Moon:
Give the Raven three desires. When the blue streaks cross the sky. Steady Secrets. Whispered Pleas. Blackened Seeds. Watch it carry them upon, shadowed wings. Gleaming Raven, suspended in the sky. Split Weather. Demand Reverence, Fill Wounds. See the moon, rise and smile. Singing Raven Cutting through, the sky. New Dawn. Slick …
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I like the leaping imagery in this one and there is some nice word art so go check out the post.

I’m always a fan of Simon ‘s nature poetry and he wrote:

The Effusion
Untitled on 9/10
Late hops have grown ripe on the vine & I drift alongside flowers / holdouts from warmer days everything is gold in this gold -en morning can gold be an allegory for depth? can the hue of the world differ from content? Temperature & temperment in a world of forms I am formless as plums grow soft / fall I am formless & gold morning is lost to …
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which puts the form vs formless poetry debate to an end! Or continues it? I think there is more going on here than it seems, which is very Simon.

And lastly, I couldn’t let an opportunity like this go by. When you are called out in name by another poet, I am compelled by the laws of poetry, to read it.

Simona's Stories wrote:

Simona's Butterfly Stories
Ode to the Beauty of Men
This piece was born after listening to an episode of Josh Datko’s Poetry on Tape, his weekly Substack show where he reads and shares poems from Substack writers…
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and I felt the steam on the camera lens after this one. The comments in the chat were alive after this one.

So Simona, thank you for this. It’s quite a nice thing to write poems for other poets here. I’ve done this in response to inspiration from other poets on Substack and I feel like we should do this more often. There is nothing wrong about talking about dead poets, but sadly Robert Bly can no longer appreciate the kind words I say about him.

Authors here like Graeme McAllister are taking time to elevate their colleagues. Tim Jagodzinski is also another one. But you don’t have to reviews or recaps, Rasmus Rosenkrantz has been in constant collaboration with colleagues with his Art House Poetry. I saw what Abby Schleifer was doing with her Paint Chip Poetry and I just jumped in. Jon Murphy is celebrating a one year substack birthday and is bringing attention to quite a few people who have helped him. There are many more of you as well.

This is not simple flattery. These are all our peers. Online life is isolating, difficult, and frustrating. I often get too grumpy too quickly about it. But as analog as I am, I will have to admit, I’m very happy to be in this digital community filled with passionate poets.

Thank you all, have a great weekend.

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