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JC's avatar

Josh,

This is so dope because it reads like the interior monologue of the watch in my piece.

You’ve made the watch a living analogue, a body that mirrors yours. In my piece, the watch is more like stalled time; or an artifact. Here it’s time that requires intimacy to function.

The drawer is where memory goes dormant. The poem is what happens when you wind it.

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Great one Josh!

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