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Angels and Demons in the ether net, watching you worship through stained glassed screens — wishing for your mortality. Attending the eucarist you elevate silicon wafers, drink the blood of bits, and genuflect with bent neck. This church organ squeaks through centimeter pipes — its holy water font is sans serif and donations are extracted on wholly scrolls. Digital mass has no weight — in this ether, a demiurge. The sign of peace splinters into pieces. Decimated. Quantized. Encoded. "May the almighty bless you, and don't forget to like, share, and subscribe."
I changed the last line to “like, share, and subscribe” from “like, share, and comment.” I have an allure for alliteration — I’m a sucker for sound.
But I think the “comment” comment came out of what I was seeing on substack for people complaining about not receiving comments. But subscribe in this line I think flows better.
This is really good. Excellent symbolism. I just want to pick it apart and eat it
I cut myself on this poem.